Areas I need to improve for my research proposal:

Your report proposal could provide more detail about some key aspects, in particular, your intended survey and the potential outcomes of your research. Given that this is an industry report, do be aware that some of your older analog sources, although excellent in quality, maybe somewhat lacking in up-to-date information. The title of chapter 3 (currently named ‘in conclusion’) needs a rethink as you will have a separate ‘conclusion’ section in your final report. Always proofread carefully, and particularly make sure to correct errors in the report title.

 Working title: 'what is the best route into producing an animated series?'

ideas how I could change my question:

"Is the use of online social media the best for distribution?'

'Is online social media the future main source for distribution?'  







my chapters;
Chapter one: The Pipeline 
Different routes into producing an animated cartoon series. (Funding, distribution, independent v.s company). The pipeline of production/ how to do. 
Chapter two: Advantage and disadvantage
Disadvantages and advantages to each. Asking current producers in different routes, costs v.s profit, economical. Any challenges.
Chapter three: The Data
Putting all the facts and statics together, a time table comparing each route. An outcome of which is the best route. 

Conclusion: Whats best now and for the future. 


TimeLine:
-       Reading Books, journals 3 weeks
-       Case studies 2 weeks
-       Contact producers to interview 2 weeks
-       Create a survey and publish  1 week
-       Analyze the results 1 week
-       Write 2 weeks 
-       Rewrite. 1 week

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