interacting panel one

I decided I want to show the roles of the moon and the sun,
the sun helps  guides spirits down to their new physical body and home, the moon helps guides dying animals and peoples spirits back home, to the sky.

I want to show close up of spirits in the sky and pan to the atmosphere of space sky, showing spirits and gods/goddess, the sun and moon and their off spring, the astrology symbols as leaders in the sky; a whole world were everyone is connected and energy of light (with some representation of them also being physical stars/ planets.)
here is some rough drawings/sketching of my ideas:

I feel this gives better understanding to the other world, the moon and sun as spirit and their roles, and their relationship with earth and how they protect it- they keep it balanced.

I want the moon to realises the world has become unbalanced because too much is dying, its unbalanced.  So it sends Luna to figure out; hence her finding the darkness. This may take up more of my story panel, especially if i need to keep it short. I think I need to itinerant my other panels now to fit with this.