Updated Beat Board

Iv updated my beat board, after my group tutorial with Lynsey. Which was suggested I change the village characters into something that connections more with the moon theme.
Because of this, I had to adapt my story to fit this in.

However, I feel this gives a more circular narrative and fits much better than my previous beat board.
My story begins with the moon, and Luna coming down to earth and ends with Luna returning, and the sun rising- a brand new day.

I was told not to show the town, but I feel this expands the world of my film. It will not be the main part but a part of the introduction. To connote the dramatic effect of the negativity of one person has on a whole town; and also gives a reason as to why Luna comes down to earth.
I have decided to also add narration/voice-over, used often in fairy tales, and means I will do much less lip-sync and characters voices. (Much more economical and time-efficient than working out lip-sync movements and syncing it up in editing.)
I would really like to work on the sounds of the atmosphere; the sea crashing against the beach, the wind howling in the trees, the sound of a crips evening. It will also be interesting to explore the ways to use sounds to create feelings, and how to make magical sound effects for Luna appearing, find the darkness, getting corrupted, being healed by the sun and fighting back.
I would really like the audience to sympathize with Luna when she becomes corrupted, feel safe when shes supported, and feel the calm once she's gone.